The Aniya was a hit with the masses. The post amassed 19 comments and lots of shares on Facebook. That was so cool of you guys! But this, this is even cooler.
Read on ahead.
Khoobsoorti bayaan karoon main teri kaisay,
Khizaan mein gulaab khila ho jaisay,
Andhere mein chiraag jala ho jaisay,
Sehra mein haryaalee ho jaisay,
Tumhare kareeb akay yunn lagta hai,
Tootay huay dil mil gaey honn jaisay,
Baat kartay huay kyun ye hont thar-thar-ayenn,
Kisi nay meray alfaaz chura liye hon jaisay,
Teri yaad main poori raat bita deta hunnn,
Tu hee meri ibadutt ho jaisay,
Chor kyun diya mujhay yunnn is tarha,
Koi khelnay kee cheez hun jaise,
Ab to aalam hai aisay ye mera,
Apna wujud hee kho diya ho jaisay
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#1 by Janaiha on October 31, 2009 - 2:20 pm
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Wah wah! Aap tu Ghalib ho sakte hain.
#2 by mamiiiiiii wami on October 31, 2009 - 6:57 pm
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ALLLA TAREEN CHA GAYAY HO
#3 by annie3 on October 31, 2009 - 7:36 pm
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yawr dis is so awsum !!!!!
#4 by Taimur Abbas on October 31, 2009 - 7:48 pm
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freaking awesome man! =D
#5 by sundus on October 31, 2009 - 8:16 pm
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awsm blossom n the best verse is
“Teri yaad main poori raat bita deta hunnn,
Tu hee meri ibadutt ho jaisay”
=)
#6 by aaima on October 31, 2009 - 9:12 pm
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aisa toe hta hai aisae kamOO meein……
anywz NYC!!! bt did u write it urself….;p
#7 by LORD NABEEL on October 31, 2009 - 9:56 pm
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love mein aesa tu hota hai na .
#8 by shayan on October 31, 2009 - 10:07 pm
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haha love??? naaah but yes one needs inspiration other than that love ki koi zaroorat nahee
#9 by rabya on October 31, 2009 - 10:22 pm
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mukarar
#10 by omair on October 31, 2009 - 10:49 pm
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excellent yaar!
@shayan
yes, inspiration is a hidden motivation
#11 by yumna on October 31, 2009 - 10:56 pm
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jazbaaaaaaaaaaaaaatiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii insaaaan:P ALAAAAA!!
#12 by Taimour on November 1, 2009 - 11:19 am
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Nice 1
#13 by Kashmean on November 3, 2009 - 1:08 pm
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Im amazed to c how some1 can distort the concept of poetry in this….totally immature and childish stanzas having no mix and match of words…pathetic
#14 by shayan on November 3, 2009 - 6:24 pm
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i like it
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