Ahhhh love! What a feeling! I wrote this love dovey poem in under 10 minutes. It’s a record I swear!
A poem straight from the heart. Dedicated to Aniya, she knows who she is. Don’t you Aniya?
Read ahead: the GLORY that is “The Aniya”
Bodily Love
Each part of my body is in love, with you
They say they want to be, with you
They want to be closer, to you
Love on my Mind
But my Mind, knows you
It wants to get away, from you
It knows getting close, to you, would lead to a heartbreak
It knows getting close, to you, would lead to heartache
It does not want my happy heart to be stake
Because it knows, you are a fake
Heart Winars Brain
But somehow, somehow my heart overpowers brain
My heart, knows better from whom to refrain
My heart, knows, with you, I am happy and sane
My heart, knows, without you, I will be in Pain
Symbol Of Love
So let this poem be a symbol of my Love, for you
Let this be an eye opener, for you
I am here waiting, desperately, for you
One day you won’t find me here
Please say what I want to hear
I know, you love me baby, the way I do
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XOXO,
Shanipani
#1 by Sikandar Usman on September 25, 2009 - 3:58 pm
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hats off to u yaar..i love it..its beauty is tht i can actually relate this poem to myself
…all the best.
#2 by Maha Usman on September 25, 2009 - 4:07 pm
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awww .I was telling awais that its a ‘wah wah poem’
<3
#3 by shayan on September 25, 2009 - 4:35 pm
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All u need is an inspiration and u can do wonders….please share it with everyone and tell them to share it further thank you
#4 by sundus on September 25, 2009 - 8:09 pm
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awww!!! how sweet….<3
#5 by nabeelrazzaq on September 25, 2009 - 8:09 pm
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its a wonderful poem .
#6 by Danial on September 25, 2009 - 9:04 pm
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Naee yaaar! This is nursery level stuff!
#7 by Abdullah Khalid Siddiqi on September 25, 2009 - 9:55 pm
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amazing…
#8 by Mustajab Amjad on September 25, 2009 - 10:52 pm
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LOL. This is kinda… gay. No wonder ABD likes it…!
#9 by Taimur on September 25, 2009 - 11:25 pm
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hahahahahaha if shani really is in love then wooohoo =D treat =D
abhi hay kahan tu shaani?? =@ america or malaysia? =P
#10 by Taimour on September 25, 2009 - 11:28 pm
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(x.x)!!
#11 by Waisybabu on September 25, 2009 - 11:28 pm
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I honestly felt this was the most awesome post by Shanipani… EVAR!
Don’t see how it’s gay though. I mean, he’s confessing his love for Aniya… a female. :/
#12 by Waisybabu on September 25, 2009 - 11:29 pm
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LOL Taimour! What does that mean?
#13 by aiman on September 25, 2009 - 11:37 pm
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aww …i really like this
#14 by Duckzilla on September 26, 2009 - 8:31 am
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You wrote this masterpiece in only 10 minutes !? You have been blessed with tremendous amounts of talent.
Don’t let the naysayers get to you. Genius like yours is seldom appreciated in an artists own lifetime. Please drop more of these at regular intervals.
#15 by shayan on September 26, 2009 - 3:58 pm
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Haha thanks sherry. And waisy……mr amjad thank u for the comment :p
#16 by Taimour on September 27, 2009 - 11:20 am
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I m not a poetic kinda guy but the poem still sounded very good….And the fact tht u wrote it directly from ur heart is even better….Allah Is poem likhnay walay ko or jis kay liye poem likhi gaye hai…dono ko kush rakhay ^_^ =D
#17 by Janaiha on September 27, 2009 - 2:18 pm
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nice poem : )
#18 by Romaisa on September 27, 2009 - 7:02 pm
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LOL.
The picture up top is missing its other half. You need that to turn this into epic.
<3
#19 by aaima on September 28, 2009 - 2:36 am
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ahan al u need is an inspiration…nYCCC!!!!
#20 by sumbalz on January 3, 2010 - 7:04 pm
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ur strong emotion is emnating from ur poem…..keep poeting,the quailty of the language will improve…..
#21 by shayan on January 3, 2010 - 7:09 pm
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thank you miss
#22 by Miask on May 12, 2010 - 12:59 pm
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I found out amusing. :p Laikin, typo here: It does not want my happy heart to be stake??
#23 by Miask on May 12, 2010 - 1:01 pm
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*found it